Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Jesse's writing



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My Nana's little cat got stuck in the pipe.Ritchie pulled him out. Nana was sad.

This was a great piece of writing from Jesse because he looked around the room for words and spelt some words all by himself. He also wrote some letter sounds in the correct order. Tumeke Jesse! 

2 comments:

  1. Wow Jesse! What an amazing story. I hope that your Nana's cat was ok.

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  2. Hi Mrs Drake
    I like this writing it is out standing work. Good Job Jesse nd I hope your Nanas Cat is alright.
    Holly

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